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Re: Report a good member!
I feel like I'm tattling xD. In any case, I nominate Twit as another awesome member. She not only takes my reviews like a champ but also discusses and actually ...
Sep 26, 2011 -
Re: May.
This was jumpy to say the least. You are trying to give interesting imagery. I can see that and as much as I would like to gulp it all down, ...
Sep 26, 2011 -
Re: The Space Between Infinity- 1
I was recommended this piece and, quite frankly, I can understand why. This is great description. Great emotion. You go into the little details in which most people push past ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Itna-tsirhc
This is creepy. Really creepy, but I like it! Now, as the poem goes, its good to take on subject matters in which are not in our general stylizations. That ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (3)
Your description work is glorious. It really is. You spend so much time and patience on those little details that we get the full scope of exactly what you want ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Embrace
Okay, so this is the first poem I have read of yours so I'm going to go into my basic breakdowns and try to explain my thoughts out as clearly ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Cat Steps (1.1)
You have succeeded, Rosey. And what did you succeed in? Well, I'll tell you. I read this without thinking about the critique at the end. I read this without really ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Serpent's Teeth [4]
Brilliance. This was sheer godly awesomeness wrapped up into one horrifyingly morbid, intensely awesome chapter of... well, awesome proportions. I feel that this is what you were just itching to ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Serpent's Teeth [3]
My problem with the characterization with this chapters lies in the grave-digger, I'm starting to think. Now, as I read through the parts with Lenore, or the anger with her ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Serpent's Teeth [2]
First thing I noticed? The half of this was far better than the first half. In fact, it paled in comparison. You were enthralled with that certain scene, I am ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Serpent's Teeth [1]
Interesting. Very, very interesting. Now, I like the fact that you're tying in a rather cryptic name such as Frankenstein into this. It gives the story in itself a darker ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Death Weapon Meister Academy *Started*
Saving a spot for Incognito for a Meister, if that's alright! And this is Silas ;D Name: Silas Elias Selwyn Age: 17 Gender: Male Type: Death weapon -- Silas is ...
Sep 24, 2011 -
Re: Pokébook: Kanto
Max Martin : Max had never seen Sam get so angry before, though anger was something Sam attributed constantly. In any case, being alone was not something Max found to ...
Sep 24, 2011 -
Re: What is Poetry?
You're playing with words, which is nice to see in a young writer. Someone who is willing to use imagery and metaphor. Its a quality that most younger poets seem ...
Sep 23, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Novel Soundtrack)
Honestly, I was skeptical about this playlist but as I got into it, there are some fantastic songs. Really, very interesting playlist, which compliments Stop and Stare well.
Sep 22, 2011
