Dreamwalker

Its nice to see that you have a taste for irony. Some writers spend their entire lives trying to create irony and never achieve it. This is so short and ...

I realize this is only one review in a sea of reviews, and that anything I have to say now will only, probably, be a repeat of what everyone else ...

My dear, this is a fantastic start to imagery! And imagery is something so very necessary in poetry. In all honesty, imagery is very much important in prose as well, ...

Interesting topic choice for so festive a season. Of course, anything that shows human flaw usually attracts me right into a piece, and in this case, I like the way ...

He drank too deeply and choked on his words as if unsatisfied by the sound. Broken in placidity, complacent in mediocrity, with the voice of panic blaring in his eardrums. ...

The pages were stained with fingerprints, each marking the years of treasured usage and nights spent in a sea of blankets, listening to the pattering of rain on her window ...

Dear, you amaze me. Honestly, amaze. And because of that fact, its about time I gave you a real review. I know, its about time. That being said, I'm not ...

Oh deary, the spacing of this poem is not working for at all. First and foremost, take out those unnecessary break lines. It makes this poem looking dauntingly long rather ...

Hello, Rysa! I'm Dreamwalker, but most people just call me Walker, and I'm here to review this today, if you don't mind! Now, what I realized from the start was ...

she tastes like cherry coke and cigarettes, each breathe the beating of a candle’s flicker -- and she sparks; a reddish hue, that burns and impassions with each sullen flame, ...

If I can figure out the timezone and its not a 4:30 in the morning ordeal, I'm in ;). And Incog as well.

its as if things never changed. 'the ink ran dry', she says when the whim has passed but the moment’s still fresh and achingly smooth -- a warm shawl of ...

This is... well, structured, if anything. A very old-english style voice so the modern way in which you stylized the structure is kind of off-balanced. Now, I'm sure you don't ...

She's got eyes like saucers. Round and perpetually stunned as if the world is far too large, and there are far too many things to accomplish for one with incredulous ...

I love this so much that I liked it twice ;)