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Re: Listen carefully.
The message is rather clear from the moment you start this piece until the moment it ends. My dear, I do apologize for such a late review. Long week and ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: The Long Road
So this is an interesting poem. Very interesting indeed, though a little bit too sporadic for my tastes in certain regards. Of course, we shall go into that in a ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: I saw the best minds of my generation destroyed by
Nuff said?
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: crackling
Dear, this might be the most real piece of poetry you've ever written. Reality aside, this is raw, and its beautiful in its rawness. It has this sort of ache, ...
Dec 6, 2011 -
Re: for you
and to think we should see each other as two finite masks, printed over porcelain to be beautiful, ugly, as you wish it but so easily shattered, broken as we ...
Dec 5, 2011 -
Re: 'Tis the Season to be Writin'!
If cheesiness is your thing... I be cooking with it. Anyways, merry Christmas
Dec 5, 2011 -
Re: The YWS 2011 Yearbook
Spot claimed, in the back near the exit, right where I like it ;). Be prepared for a rant, dearies. Its going to be a bumpy ride. Oh where shall ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Dinner.
Ah, what an interesting idea indeed! I had to read this through a couple times after the first initial read simply because of the way in which the end sort ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Playing with Matches
First and foremost, I'm going to start of with what I'm sure you expected to hear from me, seeing as I'm pretty blatant about this certain topic in poetry. This ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Cloud Dreams
I think its about time you received a review from my, my dear Kafka. Far too long indeed. And as all my reviews seemed to be doing these days, I'll ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Christmas Avatar Shop
Christmas-ify me ;D ritsuka.jpg
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: YWS Secret Santa
1.Favourite colours: Green and brown! 2.Favourite activities: Painting and walks at night (especially in winter). 3.Randomosity is the best policy : Snow is amazing but ice sucks. so. much. ilu ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: A little Christmas story
The pine leaves tickled our noses that morning, as we reached our hands under the bristled limbs until finally crashing in a jumbled mess of arms and legs under the ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: for love in tangled tongues
My dear, this is lovely. I suppose there could be many things I could say about this poem for critical help, and tearing apart anything is really quite easy when ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: you too will turn to dust, one day
she sleeps in the space between stars dreaming of light as she rests and she waits for the dust of her skin to erupt into fire so that she may ...
Nov 29, 2011
