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Re: Simple Snow Day
okay so this story was short and sweet, and i did like the idea of it. It was very romantic and cute and just basically speaking, i liked it very ...
Feb 15, 2009 -
Re: Names??
for a boy? is he formal-like or maybe rough and edgy? for a more breathtaking sort of boy you'd want something very formal, like William or Phillip. If your going ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: If Life Gave You...
This is a very coaxing poem. it was strangely and interestingly written, kind of making you think of things you thought not of before. I must say, its got quite ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: The Dreamwalker
Prologue: A Dreamer A dream was all this should have been. A miraculous, bittersweet, extraordinary dream that gripped so tightly to my heart so much so that I could barely ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: Emily
Okay so this story has a TON of potential. It's very close to my heart to hear a story like this because it is very uncommon and one of my ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: Emily
Emily This isn't what I want to be. This isn't how I want people to see myself. So many negative thoughts are swirling in my head while I'm trying to ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: Mr. Darcy or Mr. Cullen?
In my personal opinion, Mr. Darcy would make the better pairing because of the fact that he himself is just such an amazing character. I'm not saying Edward Cullen is ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: Gaea - Prologue
I give you props for using so many amazing analogies and such, but the idea of the prolouge confuses me somewhat. I can somewhat understand the idea of it but ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: A girl's pride
Hey Foxfire, This drawing is actually really good, i must say. I really like your shading ability and the emotion on her face. somethings you could fix up are the ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Kirun and Ezra
thank you all for the reviews. it will help me out a lot in the end!
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: fairies and icons
The one that looks like he's sticking up his middle finger is actually really adorable but i much prefer the ones that look to be coloured in by pencil crayon. ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Kirun and Ezra
Well this is just a drawing i did a little while ago. The one in the front with the little braids and the funny princely outfit is Kirun. As you ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: I Used To Fly
I actually found that poem very simple but beautiful. Some parts didnt clash to well and i could tell where you weakness was but for the most part is was ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: Wind Blown Heart
Chapter 1 : Farewell brothers I sat in the long grass by the cliffs of Yantal, a heavily bound book in my lap, watching the sky darken as the sun ...
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: Perfection
In poem format, its alright written. The stanza's would make more sense if they were the same amount of lines and such. In all honesty, and no this isnt supposed ...
Dec 23, 2008
