Dreamwalker

Banned for having a picture of a girl in a pink frilly dress, medieval/victorian style!

I've never been a huge fan of third person for some reason. And yes its hard to find a second person book but i do enjoy them in a sense. ...

Okay, this was something i wrote that might be a little confusing, cause you have to catch onto things about the culture I'm slowely trying to create. Please, I'm looking ...

I would get my friends to do so... but there are a TON of plot holes that I know how to fix and things I thought would be good if ...

I completely understand how you feel. My novel, Night in Love, finally ended after four years, but I had to restart it a bunch because of the fact that I ...

Right, well I've been working on a novel for the past four years, and on february 10th, I finally completed it. On completion I thought 'wow now I can move ...

Alright, a strong critique... hmm, well first I'll just simply put, this is fairly well written and very interesting to read about. From what I've read, the plot is pretty ...

alright, well at this moment in time i do not have a chance to fully critique this work so im just going to say what i thought XP sorry. well ...

alright here is my critique! I was a cool spring morning as Maria Jenkins and her 3-year-old daughter Lily made their way through the many teenage students that crowed the ...

Alrighttt, so this was a loaddd of confusion for the first while, but an interesting concept indeed. I did enjoy reading it and i do think you have quite the ...

welcome to YWS! i'm The.Dreamwalker. its a pleasure to meet you! and dont be scared of some of the.. people on this website (aka LaReina and Incognito Temptation) so yah, ...

alright, this wasnt too badly written. I quite enjoyed it and it was a nice simple read that was very cute and romantic. it was soft but had a nice ...

my belief was and will always remain that you have to believe in yourself, cause when the world tells you that you cant, only you can be your own inspiration. ...

I just thought i would put this out there from personal experiences writing and reading specific novels in both first and second person. If you are trying to get into ...

I love the sketchiness of the drawing, and the movement is very flattering. she seems somewhat lost and dazed in it almost which is very interesting from an artisitic point. ...