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Re: To Society:
I really enjoyed this poem! It had a simple base, and rhymne scheme, and although it was a tad bit overdramatic I really enjoyed this bit. And I do disagree ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: Vampire Vignettes
Hello Kyllor! I just have one thing to say before I write my critique, and that would be WOW! Honestly! This piece held such turmoil, your character in both bits ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Cant Seem to Find Inspiration Anymore
yes very much so. Thank you for the tips, and honestly, I finally started writing again :). It didnt take long but I'm glad I'm able to write again. I ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: As if I was in Love Prologue
Hi pshhxhoney. I'm The.Dreamwalker but most people just call me dreamwalker, and I'll be reviewing your work this afternoon :) Okay, so basically speaking, this work was very, very, very, ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Butterfly Wings
Thank you all so very much for your reviews and I will try and work my hardest to straighten out these kinks in my writing style :) Very informative and ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Float
Hello Kyllorac and welcome to YWS! My name is The.Dreamwalker although most just call me dreamwalker, and I'll be reviewing your work today! Okay so this bit was very cute. ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Do You YWS?
Come on! You have to pat buchanan. Everyone's doing it! *peer pressure* But I prefer YWS-ing
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: You can't handle the truth
I could sooo handle the truth! And dont worry, I'm definitly NOT interested in males over the internet! Not to metion I'm definitly three years older. To adults thats not ...
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: Writing for Publishing?
Yep, writing to get published, because I want to be a writer more then anything in the world. It's my passion, and the one thing I can really truly put ...
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: Writing Requirements
I need tea. I dont know why that is, but a fresh made cup of chai tea is the only way I can really get into the moments of my ...
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: Cant Seem to Find Inspiration Anymore
Okay, so after finishing my first full length novel, which I'm pretty proud of, I decided it was time to move on. Start something new, fresh, but when I tried, ...
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: Yesimback
Hi and welcome to YWS Yesimback. I'm The.Dreamwalker but most people call me dreamwalker or dreamy. You can call me whatever! And sure you'll get used to all of these.. ...
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: Butterfly Wings
Alright, this is just a little short story I did. It's a little bit twisted and I didn't quite know if I should have put it under fantasy fiction or ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: Mask of Sanity--Prologue
This was very short, but very interesting. It was definitly something to look into, and the idea of the character is strange, sickening, and yet, truly awe inspiring. I give ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: When Blood Drips
Hello Pinkmunki95 and welcome to YWS. I'm The.Dreamwalker but most people call me dreamwalker or dreamy for short. I'll be reviewing your work :) Alright so first off, the critique ...
Mar 12, 2009
