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Re: Being me (Part 1)
Hello! I'm The.Dreamwalker but most people just call me dreamwalker and I'll be reviewing your work this evening :) Before I start, I think it would be best if I ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Unaffected
Thank you so very much for your review! I'm definitly going to use this to help me better myself as a writer :D
Mar 24, 2009 -
Re: Is this not love?
*also clicks star*
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Starlight Requiem {Chapter One}
Okay, so I read this piece and honestly, I`m only trying to be as helpful towards you as I possibly can, and I just dont feel that this story is ...
Mar 22, 2009 -
Re: Photographs!
Very awesome! Photographs, although they may seem simple, are very much not so and you did well with that camera of yours. I have only one comment though, and its ...
Mar 22, 2009 -
Re: Edward Cullen/Viagra Parody
Very amusing ;) Although this was to short to really nit-pick or anything, I found that terribly hilarious. Probably because we all thought it we just didnt have the courage ...
Mar 22, 2009 -
Re: The Movie for Twilight by Stephenie Meyer
You do realise that there are enough people who hate the book with a passion? Like me! :D Sorry, when you grow up with the vampire chronicles, the twilight series ...
Mar 22, 2009 -
Re: Unaffected
This is just a little bit, some may recognize the characters name for I have used a few in the character tea party and in Chime Endlessly, and if you’re ...
Mar 21, 2009 -
Re: Prologue
Hey Matthew! :) it's dreamwalker here, ready to review your piece! Okay so, first the critique! My head thumped successively, one after the other getting worse and worse. Successively doesnt ...
Mar 20, 2009 -
Re: Simply Spoken
This is just a short story on the idea of Philippa Gregory’s theory of George Boleyn having experienced homosexual relations with Francis Weston. Although, brief in the story, and not ...
Mar 19, 2009 -
Re: Harry Cullen & Edward Potter
That had to be one of the most epic scripts I have read on YWS yet! I definitly like the whole Twilight bashing, Harry Potter advocating feeling to this scripts ...
Mar 18, 2009 -
Re: Teddy Bear's Story
Okay so I'm not going to go full out critic right at this moment in time, but I will definitly fully review this work when I have some time on ...
Mar 18, 2009 -
Re: What's your favorite qoute?
If life gives you lemons... eat them! - Incognito Temptation If the world is ending, I'm throwing the party! -Cobra Starship XD Dont stand outside the fire for fear of ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: Hi Guys
Hey! I'm The.Dreamwalker but most people just call me dreamwalker, and its a pleasure to meet you! Theres a few things you should know about YWS though and that is, ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: Butterfly Wings
No Incog, you do not use enough comma's ;) Yes I'm allowed to say that cause she's my baby sis XD
Mar 16, 2009
