Dreamwalker

Phillip When the first cell was open, his eyes widened in surprise as his muscles flinched under his skin. They were escaping... He suddenly found himself flinging towards the cell ...

**honestly, this one is wayy to confusing. I might end up taking my character out if it's following such a strict outline. The plot moves either way, but we're all ...

Hey Kamas :) it's Dreamwalker here with another review for you interesting story ^^. Okay, first off, if I was in your position, I would think it best to maybe ...

Meer He felt like such a coward and knew that if it came down to it he would jump in front of her to save her life. Still... the other ...

William Joshua was being Joshua, that was for sure. The same endless facade's of carefree resurance and undeniable false smiles. Of course, he knew that Joshua was only try to ...

No problem! I love your writing, so I'm sure I would probably have reviewed it anyways :)

Hi there Forever Threnody :). It's Dreamwalker here with a review as promised! Okay so first of all, my critique! Dun dun dunnn... just kidding :D. joyfully and nonchalantly I ...

One review as promised :) Okay so here it goes. With millions dead on both side, the public were never told how many had died anymore. Well, doesnt this sort ...

[b]Phillip[b] He awoke from his restless slumber, eyes half-lidded and lined with black from obvious insomnia. Even his dreams unwelcomed him forcing him back into conciousness again and again. Once ...

** remember, Meer is a very shy character. He doesnt like conflict and he isnt necessarily the first to talk but when he has something to protect he will fight ...

**I have no idea how to work with Lucian. If you guys need to find a new place to start, by all means, but please... inform me so I can ...

That would be awesome! Thanks boltageman :) So Yah, maybe I'll just introduce my character as he's in his cell or something. Maybe he has the cell next to your ...

Can someone help enter my character in? I seem to have missed the start so my character is long past being injected in there right away. Philip is a shy ...

William It all happened in a blink of an eye or so it seemed. Solitude was a friendly enough place for someone as tearstriken as William, but when he heard ...

Hi Lucy :) It's Dreamwalker, supplying the review! Ah, you like harsh critiques :). Then I shall ablige the best I can, although I cant promise it will be as ...