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Re: The mad psychiatrist
Hey there Wooster! Sorry for such a late review :P. I feel bad, but yeah, I had a hard time deciphering this poem. I like it and at the same ...
Jul 22, 2009 -
Re: my first anime drawing in side position
Ah, Anitgone made a really good point. A really good point indeed. To fully understand anime or any sort of cartooning you really need to learn the human proportions. In ...
Jul 21, 2009 -
Re: .:Faetred Threnon:.
Okay, so this was some experimenting. As you can see, the hands and feet were never drawn because I wasnt really worrying about such things. I was more into the ...
Jul 21, 2009 -
Re: The Dreamwalker - prologue (short)
Thank you all so kindly for your reviews! I will definitly take it all and see what I can do! And at the moment, he doesn't seem to cynical, but ...
Jul 21, 2009 -
Re: Country Girl chapter two
Hey, teammate :D. I'm here with a quick nit-pick that I found while reading this piece and some of your prior ones. You have a bit of an issue with ...
Jul 20, 2009 -
Re: ~Raining in February~
Prologue: Sunken Hero It had been such a warm winter. My boots sloshed and splashed in the puddles which was all that was left of the crisp snowfall the night ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Portia
Ah, a beautiful cartoon-like drawing ^_^. Very nice indeed. But, since I must review I will. Tips Okay so the eyes are wonderful but there are way too many eyelashes ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: My Main Character
Awe, Lily! This is a good drawings :). I'm just going to state some things that might help you with your drawing skills but other then that, it is brilliant! ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Maiko of Gion
Hey there Firefox ^_^. I'm guessing you've read 'Memoirs of a Geisha'? A lot of this story sounds much like it as it is a little more quickened, the character ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Love Note
You really are brilliant, Texan. Brilliant as ever. This photograph is really nice but there is only one thing I'm going to nit-pick you on and thats the height of ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: closed for editing
Hey there :). I'm The.Dreamwalker, but most people just call me dreamwalker or DW but you can call me whatever you like. I see this might be your first meeting ...
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: ~Dear Adelaide
~Okay, this may be mistaken for a suicide note, and for the most part it does sound a lot like it but it isn't. Just specifying it :). Harsh reviews ...
Jul 8, 2009 -
Re: The Sound Of Silence
**Just do what you want :D. I don't mind if we jump it or not. I am happy with wherever this storybook goes. Let's not get it confusing**
Jul 7, 2009 -
Re: Playground Hurts
Utsukushii Rosey! Beautiful :D. Okay, so, since I haven't critiqued today and this piece was really interesting, I will critique it for you :D. Nit-Pick The girl walked through the ...
Jul 7, 2009 -
Re: Loveless Dreams
**Oh, PM it to me :D** Joshua "How bout I walk you home then? Sound fair?" She didn't seem to pleased with the idea but it was late and even ...
Jul 7, 2009
