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Re: Ragdoll DT
Go with a happy ending with a few character deaths :). That way its far from cliche but everybody is happy xD.
Dec 30, 2009 -
Re: Ragdoll
Character profile: Name: Alasdair O'Reilly Ragdoll Ragdoll name: Winter Age: 17 Appearance: When he was human he looked like this: He became wicker-like, his woolen hair is a more textured ...
Dec 29, 2009 -
Re: {Le Château du Seul.}
So... yeah... I really want this to continue :). William misses everyone and everyone better miss William -_- xD.
Dec 29, 2009 -
Re: Tick Tock
One review as promised, sister dearest :). And my first review in.... months O_o so be glad you get it xD. Pay me back in skittles later ;D. Okay on ...
Dec 29, 2009 -
Re: My Hiro
Thank you Rosey and EmiAnne :). If you're wondering, in the Japanese language they refrain from saying I love you very strictly. They usually say Daisuki to establish that they ...
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: My Hiro
Okay so this short story is a little on the... long side but its more impacting if you read it from the beginning to end. I couldn't split it. So ...
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: Sylenit
Hey there. I'm The.Dreamwalker, here with a review. From what I could see from this little bit, you weren't really trying to give us a jump starter to the story ...
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: The runner
Hey there, I'm The.Dreamwalker, here with a review. And I must say, your imagery is quite astounding. Reading this I felt as if I was running in your characters shoes... ...
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: A Perfect Dimension
Hey there :). I'm The.Dreamwalker, here to review your piece of work. Okay, so, since this piece was a little bit confusing I couldn't go into my regular scheme of ...
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: The One Thing I'll Never Fully Understand
Hey there :). I'm The.Dreamwalker and I'm here to review your work. Okay, so, lets get this show on the road. Grammar and punctuation This area was somewhat good. I ...
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: The dinner table.
Hey there, I'm The.Dreamwalker, here with a review :D. Okay, so, since it has been awhile since I have been on here, I will break down my reviewing pattern. First ...
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: Chapter one of "Didn't Know"
Don't worry! You don't fail :D. Not at all ^_^. I found this piece pretty interesting just some of the errors needed to be pointed out. Doesn't make you any ...
Aug 10, 2009 -
Re: Chapter one of "Didn't Know"
Hey there! I'm The.Dreamwalker but most people just call me dreamwalker or DW but you can call me whatever you like :D. I'm here to review your work this lovely ...
Aug 8, 2009 -
Re: Alcohol
Hey there Incog! Dreamwalker here with a review, as requested :D. You know the breakdown of my reviews so lets get this show on the road. Nit-Picks The ringing sound ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: Climbing out of the pity pot
Hey there :D. I'm The.Dreamwalker, here to review your work today ^_^. Okay, my basic overviews go as follows. I first go into the nitpicks then I go into Grammar ...
Aug 5, 2009
