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Re: Assassin and Cannibal
This is a good story, and has a decent plot. There are a few typos that could easily be fixed. I think that maybe you could of gone more into ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Duchess
The story pulls you in with the three questions at the beginning, but you kinda started tje story a bit early, try to finish your thoughts than begin the story. ...
Feb 23, 2013