Dreamgirl

Thanks :D The info? Well I mean most of it is my feelings when I went there. But I guess if there are facts about the Holocaust and stuff because ...

Hey thanks for the critic, and no you didn't bruise me, lol I like being ripped on sometimes :P And as for the part with the rant when I said ...

Thanks :D I totally appreciate your replys! Thanks so much!

Thanks! And thanks for the reply!!

Thanks for the critic Sam :D I was wondering if anyone had a better title idea. I don't really like the title but I'm not sure what else to call ...

Thanks for the feedback :D I'm glad I fooled you, that's what I was going for. And Black Rose, I agree with you on that comma, thanks for pointing it ...

I liked it. I don't really understand it either. Could you explain it a little bit?

Thanks for answering my question :D And I read the prologue, I just didn't comment, but I thought that was really good too. Really sad... but really good :D

Oh my gosh, sorry about that I didn't notice it till you pointed it out. :oops:

Thanks for the comments! It really helps a lot. You have good point not to start it with dialogue, I'll work on that. Thanks again for everything you said! :D ...