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Re: My King (Introduction to the Diary of Marion Swancott)
I thought this was excellent! I couldn't stop reading once I started :D I can't WAIT to read the diaries come! I agree with Sam you really did a good ...
Mar 19, 2006 -
Re: Good-bye Baby
I agree with Xanthan. There isn't any rythm, and th rhymes are really forced. I like the idea of this poem, and I liked the story you seemed to be ...
Feb 11, 2006 -
Re: The Twelve Days of Christmas
I like this a lot! It keeps me really interested! I like how you've developed the characters really nicely already, sometimes in a book your in the first chapter and ...
Oct 12, 2005 -
Re: Pulling Me Under
I liked this a lot. It's really sad, and you can see how much you lovedd him. Some things confused me because I had no idea what you were talking ...
Sep 27, 2005 -
Re: Four to Stand - Chapter Six
I love Four to Stand! It's amazing, and I can't wait to read more. That whole thing with Max was weird, and left me wondering what he was seeing. I ...
Sep 27, 2005
