Dreamgirl

Thanks for the feedback :D I'm glad I fooled you, that's what I was going for. And Black Rose, I agree with you on that comma, thanks for pointing it ...

So I wrote this for my english class, and I just wanted to know what you guys think about it. So PLEASE give me feedback!! ********** I’m marching into battle, ...

Pain

Thanks that helps a ton! I'm gonna go try that now. :D

How about Hemingway? I guess that would depend on if you like Ernest Hemingway, I think it'd be cute for a cat :)

So I'm writing a fantasy story, and I keep trying to play around with names but I can't find one for the main character I like! Does anyone have any ...

I liked it. I don't really understand it either. Could you explain it a little bit?

Love is pain. It hurts when they leave, it hurts sometimes when they stay, it hurts if someone you love dies, or hurts you, there are so many ways love ...

Thanks for answering my question :D And I read the prologue, I just didn't comment, but I thought that was really good too. Really sad... but really good :D

I like this a lot! It keeps me really interested! I like how you've developed the characters really nicely already, sometimes in a book your in the first chapter and ...

I like both pictures. The outfit is really cool, and the face is really great. Sadly I can't draw Manga very well either :( But yours is awesome keep it ...

Its spelled Anime not animai. And think it's cool because the story lines can be pretty awesome. It deepends on the show you watch. Some are stupid, but a lot ...

Oh my gosh, sorry about that I didn't notice it till you pointed it out. :oops:

Thanks for the comments! It really helps a lot. You have good point not to start it with dialogue, I'll work on that. Thanks again for everything you said! :D ...

“So what do you think?” Sara Lawrence asked her daughter as she stepped out of car. “It’s uh, great mom.” Claire forced a smile as she stared into her mother’s ...