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Re: Poison (need a new title)
My body was so close to his, I could feel the heat from his skin engulfing mine. His eyes pierced my scalp, my head tilted towards hell. “Look at me,” ...
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Re: Water
i like this and the concept. The only thing is that I think the last line kind of ruins it. It's a great poem and it gets you thinking truly ...
Aug 31, 2009 -
Re: The Bubble Theory #2
Above him two great sun hung in the sky, overlapping each other. I'm assuming you meant 'suns'. That's really the only grammar thing I noticed but I'm rather awful with ...
Aug 31, 2009 -
Re: The Bubble Theory #1
I enjoyed this a lot. I like the character and the situation. Even in the short amount of time you go through quite a few emotions. After meeting the ball ...
Aug 31, 2009 -
Re: Secret: Azaria (chp1)
Secret by Maiya Hawkins Azaria It has always been rumored that eyes are the window to a person’s soul and at last they have broken the seal. In the year ...
Aug 31, 2009
