Dream_Catcher

Ok in the beginning it seemed to be moving rather smoothly but when you hit the 'mold' line it threw me off a little. It also got a little abstract ...

well i can say for sure that i like this poem more than 'Time'. I can connect to the actual situation of the poem more and know how the narrator ...

i suppose i will be the devils advocate for a round here. I have to say the poem is not my favorite. I think much of it is 'spoken' language ...

Love me perfect Just show me you can try Doesn’t have to be forever Just before I die Love me perfect So I can sleep tonight Show me kindness Just ...

Thank you roon for the excellent review. I have gotten mixed thoughts on this in the past as well. I love the idea of the piece but I want everything ...

Poser: very simple but alright. Not a favorite i must admit. a few classic concepts that i've seen before though I do like the last line in mention of "selfish ...

very simple and yet very well written and meaningful in only a few words. simply a very good work.

Thank you both for your reviews. I appreciate your compliments and am glad that the poem could affect you in a powerful way. Mr. Knightley I will consider your title ...

I liked this poem and the way it was written and all. There was a minor spelling problem with strength in stanza 4 but other than that i didnt catch ...

Write Think of something Use your imagination Sweet imagination Creating those sparkling seas like diamonds Bordering a forest of mystics Fairies flying with fiery colors Fluorescent flowers guiding m

i like this. i actually feel like i can relate 2 it a lot. Born to turn away my eyes from deception. i interpreted this as being told 2 turn ...

A truth born in obscurity, like a child. Its soft face, clear skin. Tiny, new. Age’s importance pushed back into the shadows; Too much else that matters at birth, like ...

ultimately the poem is very elementary.

just a little cliche though i know where you are coming from with it. I can relate in that there aren't too many 'good' guys around and its hard to ...

Jetpack, you're exactly right. This is a rough draft and all, though I've written about 7 chapters more than this. I have fallen in love with the concept I just ...