Dream_Catcher

Ok I'm not exactly new, but I didn't know where else to post this. I was wondering how you post topics as your favorites. It says to find the topic ...

thank you all for your help! and now that i look at what i said its more that my characters did have personalities i just didn't know how to express ...

Two silver rings. But which to choose? One holding, the chances of an adventurous life, or a gruesome death. The other, grants only life, average at best. Only one with ...

i think everyone in YWS can connect to this. its simple and good. not too much 2 report besides that. i believe somebody already mentioned the first rhyme which i ...

very cool. the first ones my favorite!!

very simple and almost comical. i believe that was your purpose. ultimately a 'cute' poem. not too much i can say against it. good one! :)

WELCOME new member!! and about the poem :) I think it has a simplicity to it that makes it good. Living her eternal nightmare Called "Life" these lines are a ...

very well written and very realistic. I can feel the narrators pain and dilemma. Very well written and I like the simple style it accentuates the emotion. very nice!

“Do you love me?” her words pained me to answer, as they slipped from her lips, unspeakably sudden, like the cliché shot to the heart; A shot I knew I’d ...

i love this poem. very very well written. every line made perfect sense to me and was a little sad but clearly from the heart. the feeling of wanting something ...

Hello there new member and welcome!! anyhu about the poem. I understood the beginning well about the moon, but when you went out of that you kind of lost me. ...

Name: Quew Age: 26 Gender: Female History: People know very little about her because she is like a shadow. In the night she takes out street walkers, homeless men, shopping ...

So I write stories but what I've found recently that is missing from all of my stories is the characters personalities. Not to be cocky, I find myself quite good ...

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Walk past the mirror, And as I get nearer, I see a face you know well; At least soon you will tell. See it’s not the appearance, But my disappearance. ...