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Re: The Forest Of Sunset
yeah another thing with me is that I don't doublecheck my work like I should sorry
May 31, 2008 -
Re: Pulling Tides
hey guys thanks for commenting on this, sorry that I haven't yet fixed it but I really haven't had the time to hope ya'll understand!
May 30, 2008 -
Re: I am obsest with cats so...
once agian proof of how much you like warriors, i loved this one of your best!!!
May 12, 2008 -
Re: All Because of Father
when i read this i started to think about about brambleclaw for some raeson but other than that i really loved this!!!
May 12, 2008 -
Re: Novel: 1 Chaper: Proluge
i really like this cant wait to read more and as i told you i love the warriors series please keep writing
May 12, 2008 -
Re: The Forest Of Sunset
Sorry... I'm editing it so I can change the names, the storyline...etc...
May 12, 2008 -
Re: Pulling Tides
ok thanks i'll see what i can do when i have some more time on my hands
May 11, 2008 -
Re: Two Stars in the Night Sky
i really liked this, and i realize your a bit older than me but when they start talking i noticed that you didnt capitalize the letters, but other than that ...
May 11, 2008 -
Re: Pulling Tides
I know that this is not just yet a love story but it is going to turn into one soon!! Chapter #1- Who Is Gonna Ask Me To The Dance? ...
May 11, 2008 -
Re: Forgotten Diety chapeter 1
yeah, i kind of agree with some of the other comments. it just needs to be more detailed, but other than that it has alot of potential keep it up!!!
May 11, 2008