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Re: All I Want Is A Smile
Thanks for your feedback... but both of you said that you saw grammatical errors and I'm not really sure what gramamtical errors your talking about. (I read it over and ...
Mar 19, 2010 -
Re: Dont look away
Don't look away. Don't hide from me. I want to be near you. I can hear you breath, say something to me. I hear your chest heave, don't be scared ...
Mar 19, 2010 -
Re: After Adonis
Helloo. I really liked it. The imagery is beautiful, the wording/phrasing is lovely as well. The only thing is that it started off kind of sudden... and I understand what ...
Mar 19, 2010 -
Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)
Sorry I'm posting again... I just thought of another question. Is there a way you can respond to the reviews people give you on your stories? Also: How do you ...
Mar 19, 2010 -
Re: The Happiest Days of Your Lives
This is so beautiful... I just lost myself in it. You've inspired me to write something, and I think that's the most fantastic thing I writer can do: inspire other ...
Mar 19, 2010 -
Re: All I Want Is A Smile
All I want is a smile. People walk by you, they look at you, they look away. They don’t mean to, it’s not their fault… but they never smile. It’s ...
Mar 18, 2010
