Drawers

I started typing a second chapter, then decided to stop and just see what people thought. You can check out the previous chapter here: I might decide to make the ...

Written by popular demand. It needs lots and lots of work. I'm not sure yet if I like where I'm going with it. Tell me if you like the plotline ...

Found this in a folder on my computer... obviously I got bored with because I stopped mid-sentence. I might decide to make something of it, tell me what you think. ...

Hello! First of all, I love your writing. It's so vivid. "light spreading like liquid throughout the pink, cotton candy clouds." Ah. I also loved this exchange: "I laughed too ...

Hello! I love the way you write! Fluently and simply, nicely worded and eloquent. Good job! One little thing I have to say though is that the NAMES in this ...

This is a continuation on a previous "Pepper" post I made. I didn't really like that one much, so I rewrote it and also added a bit on. Let me ...

Not going to get into nitpicks because I think the other reviewers have that covered. I did, however, really like it :) Yeah, it was confusing and I didn’t really ...

“And so we move on to chapter 19. Hold onto your hats kids, this one’s about Jeffy.” Elliot moved to adjust the iPod in the speakers. “I actually did really ...

My picture for some reason isn't uploading... I go to Edit Preferences and then Edit Photo, but when I use the browse button and open the file I want to ...

I go to Edit Preferences and then Edit Photo, but when I use the browse button and open the file I want to upload, then click submit, the page loads ...

Please be brutal, I need all the help I can get. I know it's kind of rambly and awkward at the moment, but I do kind of like it. I'm ...

I found a bunch of nitpicky things just in the first few paragraphs, so I didn't try to list them. You've got an intriguing story, but it definitely needs work. ...

Flies buzzed around my head like I was already dead and rotting. My clothes were like Saran Wrap against my body and the fan I was holding in front of ...

The name is after an Australian singer I really love. “Lenka.” You should check her out if you don’t already know her. I was putting my little brother to bed ...

A few nitpicky things: :smt001 - "He could barely breath out of nervousness and the little breath he did get was filled with the smoke from the cigar that the ...