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Re: Save you
Thank you for sharing this poem. I was imagining a priest giving last rights to a dying man. Or as was said a homeless man. Your flow is even and ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: Hello
Hello to all. Im a long time fantasy nut and have loved writing since childhood. I've never published anything but i have always known theres a book or two in ...
Jun 20, 2009 -
Re: Throne of Sand
"I can feel it....I know you feel it too." The first rays of light flickered through the blackness clouding his vision. As every other day his mind sparked at the ...
Jun 20, 2009 -
Re: Violet - Chap. 1
I enjoyed this opening. Keep it coming :) PS: A bit of description would brighten the background so to speak.. Its very fluid in the read it just needs some ...
Jun 20, 2009 -
Re: In a Time of Dragons
Hello and props for posting. I would have to agree with all the previous posts. As I read I could imagine a classroom and a teacher explaining the history to ...
Jun 20, 2009 -
Re: Heart Break
Sunrise I noticed a sparkle of purest golden beauty as sweet as the first sunrise. I was lost on an endless adventure. Climbing your lips and swimming your hair. Eyes ...
Jun 20, 2009
