DrammaMomma

- Shush, come on, don’t talk so loudly . > Just see the way she struts. Urgh, so proudly . - I can’t stand the way she bosses me around. ...

Hi there. A short and simple poem:) Short poems like this makes it easy for readers to read it. :D However, I feel there are some mistakes. Consumed in my ...

Hi there. A simple poem. Maybe you could add in more into this poem? It's kind of... Plain? No offense. Besides that, I feel that you have some errors and ...

Hey there, thanks for the reply. (: I will review my poem and try to improve it again. Thanks for the suggestion! :D

Inhaling and exhaling, all that smoke. This is seriously, not a joke. Cigarettes are expensive, don't you see why? You're influencing others to give it a try. I tried to ...

Hi there. Firstly, good attempt, however, no offence, but it's not one of the best poems I've read. I feel that you've got some mistakes here however and I've underlined ...

Hello there! I feel that this is a pretty different poem, from the ones I have been reading. The use of " Old English " here is what makes it ...

Hello there! I felt that this is a really touching poem... I've had dogs too, who had passed on. Thank you, for this poem, which manages to bring out that ...

Hi there! A cool, simple poem. Not much words, but lots of meaning. I like the way you twist the phrases around. It's a clean poem, unlike other really deep ...

Hi there! Your poem is great, in a sense that it has rhythm and flow. I do like how the Sun and the Moon is put into the poem. (: ...

Hi, thank you for the reply!! (:

Happy Birthday Mummy, Your cake was really yummy. You're growing older every year, Mummy, I love you my dear! More wrinkles I see, Someone's ageing! He-he-he. My mummy, pretty and ...

Hi, it's a good piece, simple. I agree with vixeyt, a good choice of words indeed. It brings out the word Jealousy pretty well. I enjoyed the ending line, "it's ...

I'm Sorry. I'm sorry, I'm not much of a help, Even at times when you had yelped. I'm sorry, I wasn't there to help you my friend, I promise you ...

Prioritize Stress, problems, headaches, My friend, it's time to step on the brakes. Are you sure it's worth; Getting distracted because of him? Sit down in a dark room, With ...