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Re: The Ranger's Battle (prologue)
This story is very well written, though I would suggest adding more to the descriptions, even though theyare not main characters. You do not need to say, "He was a ...
Dec 10, 2011

This story is very well written, though I would suggest adding more to the descriptions, even though theyare not main characters. You do not need to say, "He was a ...
Dec 10, 2011