Dragons99

Please comment on my story, I need reviews!!! Prologue: The dragon's low, moaning call echoed through the forest and faded into the shadows of the night. A cloaked figure trods ...

Please comment on my story, I need reviews!!! Prologue: The dragon's low, moaning call echoed through the forest and faded into the shadows of the night. A cloaked figure trods ...

Hey, anyone who wants to post me your stories and I will review them in only a little bit! i can review fantasy the best, but sci-fi is okay, and ...

Sorry about that............. [b]Name: Drake Shadow [b]Age: 18 [b]Affiliation: Kingdom [b]Weapon: His father's sword, which will go up into flames when Drake says the enchanted words [b]Personality: D

I'd like a partner!

Name: Drake Shadow Age: 14 Skills: Master of fire, swordfighting, dragon-taming, hunting, Weaknesses: fear of water, impatient, overconfident Appearance: Brown hair, blue eyes, sword shaped birthmark

This story is very well written, though I would suggest adding more to the descriptions, even though theyare not main characters. You do not need to say, "He was a ...