Dragongirl

Hey Alle, I'm here to review your story. Let me just start by saying I really love your descriptions. You have a way of writing that simply draws a picture ...

HMmmm…cOnFuSeD pErSoN... :) Well, not sure how to review this because frankly< I've not read a piece like this before. So for starters, points for originality. I didn't spot many ...

Ok, so you've been so good about checking out my story 'CinderAllen' and reviewing it that I figured it would only be fair if I did the same for you. ...

Hey there Mate, first let me just say welcome to the YWS! Now about this post. Not really sure what to say about this. It is....interesting. Let's start with the ...

Wow. I really liked this. So different from the normal stuff you read on here. I thought this line was very good. leaving a track of brine That was a ...

Okay I liked this story a lot, but.... It needs to be a tad bit more original. Don't get me wrong you have set Peter Pan in a modern world ...

The plot thickens. I must say this story is very interesting. Not at all what one would expect of the story of Red Riding Hood, but deeper than your previous ...

Ohhh, my favorite one so far. I can not critique this, I can only love it. I'm sorry Leah. I love how you've brought this story along. I'm on the ...

i've been waiting for this part so I was happy to see you had posted. I thought this was great, though, like the other parts, a llittle on the short ...

My biggest problem with this was that you called it a horror story. Maybe something's wrong with me but this didn't give me that creepy feeling in my gut that ...

Well I said I'd review this but have been putting it off because I dislike having to review when there is nothing I can say will make the piece better. ...

Wow, unexpected ending. I don't really know what to say. It was weird and confusing. I felt like I didn't understand what was going on. For a little while I ...

Why the heck did I ever open my mouth and say anything about parts?!? I like it. I'll do a real review at the end of part two. Hurry up ...

Hey, was rereading this and notice a couple typos, figured you might want to know. The first, celebrated in the most exuberant *manor possible. I believe you meant *manner. And ...

Well, well, well. Another fairy tale retold from our beloved Leah, as aways enjoyed. To be honest, I read the frist three parts and didn't comment on them for the ...