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Re: Faith: Introduction
very very nice! I love the part where you said "As long as one Moon Child lived, there was still Faith." that gave me the shivvers ! XD Although, one ...
Oct 25, 2007 -
Re: So Much for Magicians
Very nice! Fast-paced, I like that. :D I am sorry I haven't read your prologue... :oops: but maybe sometime in the near future I will get the chance! :D I ...
Oct 25, 2007 -
Re: In The Midst of Chaos- Prologue
Very good intro, but I noticed a couple of things: “Wake up! Wake up!” The harsh whisper resonated in Markali’s ear. Her warm breath left a tingling sensation over the ...
Oct 24, 2007
