Drago101

Hey, it's Drago. This is my attempt at a suspense/thriller. I hope you enjoy the story. --- The blood flowed so smoothly, pooling onto the archaic forest floor. The sweet ...

Hello, I'd like to review your story. I thought it was interesting. It was a little boring, but interesting none the less. I thought it was well written. However, one ...

Hello, I'm Drago, and I will be attempting a review. First I would like to say, that your writing style is interesting. It was very narrative, and in the beginning ...

Hey Proto, it's Cpt J Luke F on war stories. What he means by posting in chapters is put it in different topics. I haven't been able to read all ...

Hello, Drago here to review your story. When I saw this, I was thinking it would be another fallen angle story. It surprised me when I actually enjoyed reading it. ...

I really like the description in this story. Your characters are magnificently crafted into your story. I can't really see where the plot is going, but it is early in ...

Thanks for all the advice and compliments. I am going to be working on the next chapter soon.

Very nice story. Kaedee pointed out some of the only mistakes in the prologue. I noticed another mistake, though. Dobliv entered combat with the mysterious man. The man grabbed Dobliv’s ...

Here is chapter one of a story I have just started working on. I hope you enjoy it. --- An ancient forest was lit by glimmering white lights that hovered ...

Welcome to the site other writer I made fun of. I would not have called you guys pansies if I would have known you were all going to join the ...

In the war stories forum we would say, "awesomesauce." Since I am not writing there I am forced to say more dull words that mean the same thing. The story ...

I think this needs some work. Sorry if it seems like I'm bashing it, but no plot is evident. It doesn't seem like you thought the story through. The description ...

Sorry for the double post, but I just realized something. I can't finish this story on this site. I won't tell the reason, but it just won't work. Sorry about ...

Thank you guys for the advice. I will do my best to describe the world in the next chapter. I do have a question, though. Do I post my chapter ...

The idea of this prologue was not to go into the character. Some characters are just props. You don't create an attachment to them and use them to invoke some ...