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Re: Heroes of Valtome, Chapter 1
Dear author, The first thing I want to say is keep on writing your book, especially if you have a world already built and developing (if you need help, I'm ...
Mar 27, 2020 -
Re: Woes of the Gladiator
Powerful story, stong charcater, balanced picture, beautiful and pleasant language. I really did enjoy the main idea, because a human's moral strength is one of the most interesting topics for ...
Mar 26, 2020 -
Re: Thoughts of Insanity
Very powerful poem. No rhyme but rythm is present, which makes it drum in my head, it makes the poem stronger. The form reminds me of the way our thoughts ...
Mar 25, 2020 -
Re: Fire Girl - Prologue
Should you continue writing this story? Yes. Why? Many reasons. First, I already like it, because I like everything written so well and like when a story is read easily, ...
Mar 23, 2020 -
Re: Serendipity - chapter 1
What can I say, dear author? I'm waiting for the second chapter! As this is only the first chapter, I'd call the story simple, but I have a feeling that ...
Mar 23, 2020 -
Re: Ace of Hearts [Chapter 1]
At last! At last somebody has written down my dreams and fears. I've always wanted a portal hole appear in my bedroom (I still do), and I've always been afraid ...
Mar 22, 2020 -
Re: A Lifetime (Chapter One)
There must be at least one deadly needed phrase in my review: I am waiting for the second chapter. Is anything else needed? Well, I think I should say why ...
Mar 22, 2020
