Dracula

Thank you!

Thank you! I tried to show that although they were all villains, they didn't necessarily realise it. I mean, I did say the Prince saw the error in what he'd ...

Thanks, Iggy!

Thanks! I liked your format, but of course, if you review novels you can't copy and paste the whole thing - so just quote sections.

I've started editing this and had a go at rewriting the start. If you get time, could you please read the first bit and tell me what you think?

Oh, don't worry, I read it! I just didn't have time to comment.

Thanks. Aimery came from a medieval name generator. I like it too. :D

Thanks! I'll see if I can give you a review in return. :)

Haha thanks for the kind words. :D

Thanks!

Thanks for the review! It should've said I'm sick of being a chicken . :D

Thanks! You definitely pointed out some important errors on my part. I'll get around to editing this some time and work on them. :D

Thanks for the review! It's not really a city, just a suburban area or town(I'll try to make that clearer), and my town doesn't have buses after 5:30! :P In ...

Thanks for my review! My justification was that she'd just listened to the woman playing, and it had completely changed the mood for the better. So she already feels like ...

Thank you for such a detailed review! Nancy does own the burger place. I originally thought of calling it 'Nancy's Burger Palace' or something with her name in it, but ...