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Re: True Recollections : The Memoirs of Laura Creyton [Preface]
Hello, I'm in a rush but I wanted to give a quick review! :) thedelphinater did a good review and there isn't much else to be said. I definitely agree, ...
Jun 4, 2009 -
Re: Into The Depths [Prolouge]
update- i have decided to take chenkas advice. Im editing it out the prolouge and cutting her early years into two chapters. One - about the death of her mother ...
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: Wild Red Leaves
It's really good, but I have one problem with it. you describe too much. Every little detail is described, so much that you forget whats going on and it takes ...
May 30, 2009