Dr.Awesome

A little creepy, sounds horror or thrillerish; but could it possibly be romance? I am the Doorway

It kind of reminds me of the Artemis Fowl series I read when I was younger, if you've heard of it. It concerns this twelve-year-old boy who is a criminal ...

Hmm. It's intersting, and I definitly want you to continue, but it's pretty short for a post; I wish you had written more. That way mor would be explained, because ...

Wow, your revision is great! You fixed it up even better than I had imagined it. Can't wait to read more!

This story was pretty cool. It has the potential to become a big, epic adventure. I'm not much of a grammar geek so I'm not going to dwell on those ...

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I've never seen a story based on this before, but I after reading it I can't understand why? It was a great character study, and you portrayed a very realistic ...

Ooh, I like what I see! The beginning was a great hook, and your vocabulary built up the suspense nicely. Just like the reviewer above me stated, this is a ...