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Re: that soft classic music
Nice ! Like the way everything was formulated. Keep it up !
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Love (Unfortunately)
Oh nice ! At first, I didn't see that it was an acrostic...until i wondered why you every letter starting a phrase was in italic -__-
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Stigma Of Love
Beautifully written. Though there was a part were I got confused. Try making your writing clearer. Btw, I loved seeing how mixed up the narrator was.
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: What You Meant To Her
Awesome poem. Really good, congrats ! :)
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Broken
Wow. Amazing. I could feel the emotion, everything the girl was feeling. Most of all, i really can relate to this poem. It's just beautiful.
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Hard Love
Haha noooooo it wasnt meant to be a song...just a poem :) I just fail in song writing -__- ..And thanks for the critics...i'll try to correct myself next time ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Rain
Niice ! :) I especially loved the rhymes :)
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: I Was Never Meant to be
Ahh Okaayyy.....What, you guys think it's like TOO morbid and um sad and all? Cause hum, if that's the case i would like to tell you that well not all ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: 'Til Death Do Us Part - Chapter 2
Oh my...here i love the details you put in it about the kiss for example and what the narrator was feeling. I can't wait for the third chapter!!! :D
Apr 1, 2011