DovesandHawks

Demoness, I agree with you guys! Like I wrote earlier, I didn't really plan anything, It sort of just came out. My future pieces will be more poetic, I hope. ...

Hey Talkingbird :) I've read the book, and I think the theme you having going on here goes along with it. The whole feeling of wanting to leave is expressed ...

Hey Jennya, thank you! I'm glad to be here haha. The only reason I really picked the word apathy is because I feel that sometimes, certain things can happen because ...

Haha, it's ok. I'll appreciate any type of review. Well, thank you very much. :)

Wow. All I can say is that this is a very powerful poem. Just through your writing style, I can imagine the thought process of someone that's been "broken." Also, ...

Hey, I really liked this. You channeled your experiences quite well. The summer seemed to Swiftly go, as Taylor sang her soothing tones. I thought this part was really clever ...

All around the world, we see its actions. Transactions take place, but only a fraction are seen to save face. Distractions take our focus from what's important in life, a ...