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Re: -Entry deleted-
Really good! Excellent description. Only a few easy to fix mistakes. Keep writing!
Sep 6, 2008 -
Re: A Vampire Story CH.1
Not bad! So small points could do with a bit more description though. Interesting adaptation of vampires. Good work!
Sep 6, 2008 -
Re: Horror
What the heck? i'm gonna make it more of a story and then maybe you'll change your mind!! I have to wonder what the point of this story was. It ...
Jan 26, 2008 -
Re: Dark
horror. something really hard to do!! but not bad, maybe the next one will give me nightmares!!!
Jan 14, 2008 -
Re: The Decieved
not a bad storyline great description. keep it up!!!
Jan 14, 2008