DoubleTake

This is only a segment of the story, i hope you thoroughly enjoy and leave some helpful comments! “Go on son! You can do it!” Mrs Rogers was screaming at ...

Wonderful, excellent built up suspense. Very thoughtfully written in a fantastic style. I was drawn in! A few easy to fix mistakes nothing to worry about. You should write alot, ...

Really good! Excellent description. Only a few easy to fix mistakes. Keep writing!

Not bad! So small points could do with a bit more description though. Interesting adaptation of vampires. Good work!

This story was written to be less than 800 words. Hope you enjoy and please leave fed back. I would be most grateful!!! The Dream Kite One day, a long, ...

Hi, this is a section of my story, more to come soon!!! Please leave feedback i would be grateful!! A certain Polar Bear, namely Blanket Ted, was wedged. Wedged can ...

What the heck? i'm gonna make it more of a story and then maybe you'll change your mind!! I have to wonder what the point of this story was. It ...

This is a section of my story. The next section coming soon.... I went charging up the isle, the beast hot on my heels. I could feel his breathe on ...

horror. something really hard to do!! but not bad, maybe the next one will give me nightmares!!!

not a bad storyline great description. keep it up!!!