DottieSnark

I didn't mention because I didn't know how to tell you that from the chapters I've written so far that the romance is going into a different direction. >.> I'm ...

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like the story. I'm glad you liked the character and dialogued. I always considered those my biggest strength, and I'm glad I'm not ...

I just wanted to say thank you again. I edited it and reuploaded the chapter. I think I have a better handle on the close 3rd Sam POV now. I ...

Hey thanks. I'll take a look at that flashback section again. I kind of don't want to start off a scene earlier, because then I feel like it'll just take ...

Oh yeah, I didn't mean that you can never have those types of descriptions, but just that you should value the types of description that actually tell you something about ...