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Okay, well now that two people have said it I think I definitely need to take another look at that exposition again. You're so right about parts of the dialogue ...

Yeah, this was the chapter where my own story kind of starts taking on a life of its own. I actually do have an idea of where this story is ...

I'm actually trying not to just flat out recreate Rory's love life but with Jess. There is no "Dean", or "Tristan", or "Jess", or "Logan" figure. His love life is ...

Thank you so much for the review. I know the chapter was long and that was something I agonized over. After talking to a few people I decided to post ...

Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Exposition was definately something I was worrying about during this piece, so I'll try to take another look at ...

Sam and Dean are both *really* hard character to write for because the show has been on the air for 14 years and they've gone through so much character development. ...

Again thank you for the review. You never have to worry about anal nitpicking with me when it comes to typos because I sometimes really struggle to notice them if ...

Thanks for the review! I redid this scene and introduction *so* many times and I'm glad the effort was worth it. I like your suggestion for the pay by the ...

I'm not saying it's not important. I'm sure will be. You're clearly are setting up a big plot point between Zan and his father. I'm saying as a reader you ...

Zrillis, I just wanted to add that for all my critiques about this chapter and how you handled the father, I really do agree with Anamel on that point about ...

Hi, thanks so much for the review! A lot of your questions can be answered if you're familiar with the show that this is a fanfic of: Buffy the Vampire ...

Thanks again for this review. It really does mean so much to me. I see I have less typos and more just wonky sentences this time (and oh I can't ...

I'm glad you how I did the POV switching. I actually went back and forth on that *a lot*. I kept rewriting these early chapters again and again trying to ...

First of all, I really want to thank you for all the reviews you've done. You have no idea how much it has helped me. *Especially the typos*. I think ...

Thanks for the reviews. And I *really* have to thank you for the time you put into to catching my typos and unclear sentences. The first seven chapters of this ...