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Re: Escaping Darkness 2
...WOW. This was an AMAZING story. I absolutely loved it. There are very few and very minor errors. Like areas where there should be commas, but there aren't any. It's ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Undescribable Love (Chapter 1)
To start off, this was an alright story. There are some parts where you forgot to put capitals or where you didn't put correct punctuation, but the thing I found ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Vampire Princess Diaries
This is pretty good! I like how you have Sia think about what she's doing. There are some spelling mistakes, but they're easy to fix. So I suppose they're nothing ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: The Dawning of Blood (Part One)
This is really great so far! I love it how you started it. With the whole mystery behind the angel and her story, it just made the girl seem interesting. ...
Oct 22, 2011