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Re: A Taste of It
Wow! This was really good! I love it how he was blaming Francesca for everything. Maybe he shouldn't have let her choose things? xD Oh, and I think Hans should ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Escaping Darkness 2
...WOW. This was an AMAZING story. I absolutely loved it. There are very few and very minor errors. Like areas where there should be commas, but there aren't any. It's ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Undescribable Love (Chapter 1)
To start off, this was an alright story. There are some parts where you forgot to put capitals or where you didn't put correct punctuation, but the thing I found ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Vampire Princess Diaries
This is pretty good! I like how you have Sia think about what she's doing. There are some spelling mistakes, but they're easy to fix. So I suppose they're nothing ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: The Dawning of Blood (Part One)
This is really great so far! I love it how you started it. With the whole mystery behind the angel and her story, it just made the girl seem interesting. ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Circus Of Song Intro
The Circus Of Song Intro The demons rounded the corner again, their large, bright red eyes squinting as they rushed toward him. Darulli clenched his teeth and kept going. Stone ...
Oct 22, 2011