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Re: Hazel- chapter 1
Oooooooooohh the misspellings~ They buuuuuuurrrrnn.. O-O Not that you don't got potential PippiChan. ^^ Those kinds of things just....bother me. Though, if da witch is tellin' Hazel that she saved ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Hazel-prologe *Edited*
VEEWWWWYY GOOD PIPPIKUN. THOUGH, YOU COULD REALLY USE SOME CAPITALIZATION/GRAMMAR/SPELLING CORRECTION. JUST SAYIN', CUZ THAT KIND OF THING BOTHERS THE CRAP OUT OF ME. Besides that, I liked the majorit
Nov 5, 2010