DontStopBelieving

Thanks for your review, I didn't even know I had a contradicting thought. And there is a plot, Actually... the girl is wanting to go to earth. haha, but thanks ...

In the "I always told my parents, that cops needed to kill the person they way they killed someone." I meant, ex: someone shot somebody in the chest three times ...

Hey guys, I just wanted to say thank you for reading this and giving me feedback. It means a lot to me. :D I am actually going to go through ...

I love all the emotions in this story. You can really connect with how the characters feel, almost as if you were them. This is all around off to a ...

Aw, thanks. I really appreciate it. If you go to my profile and click on my portfolio tab, you can read the first chapter there :)

Thanks for the comments guys, it really helps alot. Ash- more background on their friendship will be in the next chapter. Miracles- thanks for the advice. It really helps!