Dolchon

thankyou those really help

Doesnt everyone sometimes like a bit of nonsense :)

thankyou so much!

The story itself is an extraordinary volume of a piece that I have been working on for a while now. The story is based on a girl wondering through the ...

you should have some respect for different styles of writing and maybe just accept my opinion!

the whole point is that is that it has no point its meant to not make sense and leave you in mystery. Do you have any good points?!?!? I also ...

hi

This is an awesome story po5iedon! i must say youre quite a future author. IN my opininon the story needs to have more interactions with the companion other than just ...

HI friend from school (mwahahaha)! The title is to do with the last line of the story (if you read that far!) on the other tips thanks!