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  • Lyric Poetry Re: What Happened

    Loved it. :) Only beefs with this are the lines 2 and 5. Line 2 has a sort of awkward comma in it. It would actually read as one straight, ...

    Dec 19, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Crickets

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    Dec 19, 2010


Poems were like people. Some people you got right off the bat. Some people you just don't get - and never would get.
— Benjamin Alire Saenz, Aristotle and Dante Discover the Secrets of the Universe