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Amazing story line i feel like i'm reading about the actual naruto episodes. As if it's like an unpublished file or something. I'm concerned that the three Genin are advanced ...

In contrast to what Kepe said I personaly loved yor poem. It caught my attention and kept it there. The structure seemed fine to me and it flowed. You never ...

lets see i liked the over all plot of the story. It was quite entertaining. I liked you detailed discription of the characters, it allowed you to visualize the scenes ...