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Amazing story line i feel like i'm reading about the actual naruto episodes. As if it's like an unpublished file or something. I'm concerned that the three Genin are advanced ...

The poem is too plastic it's like i heard it all before but the style that it is written in isn't used much lately, so that you can bring it ...

This poem is inspired by Gaara from Naruto. The specific episode that inspired me is the fight in the forest between him and Naruto. Eyes that are full of loneliness ...

I can't really reda any emotion in this poem besides disgust. To me it seems like a hurried peice of writting and the title was so promising. Add more details ...

Intresting begining. Some lines are a bit contradicting as Arion pointed out. I think you can give more details in the description of the princess and Cupid. I hope this ...

Contradicted Emotions I admit it! Daddy didn't love me enough, Mommy never showed any care. Instead of looking to boys for Love, I look for pain. I'm already used to ...

In contrast to what Kepe said I personaly loved yor poem. It caught my attention and kept it there. The structure seemed fine to me and it flowed. You never ...

lets see i liked the over all plot of the story. It was quite entertaining. I liked you detailed discription of the characters, it allowed you to visualize the scenes ...