Djinn

Hey, I really, really, really, REALLY like this. This is awsome. I mean-not in a sadistic way, but in an awsome way!!! It's really hard to critique poetry, but when ...

hey! nice poem! As always, it's really hard critiqing a poem because there is so much leeway given to the writer on presentaion of emotions and the set up of ...

HOLY---!!! That was EPIC!!! I really felt like crying afterwards!!! I loved it. It left me speechless yet with so many questions! I love your details and story. There really ...

The Voyage of the Pied Piper Ch. 4 I had never had so much attention before in my life. It all happened in a blur. Right after I fought and ...

hillarious. The only thing is that that song will be stuck in my head for DAYS NOW. thanks. thanks alot. really appreciate it. (i hope you've realized by now that ...

Hello! I just want to say, what a great piece. I only picked up on one mistake that i could see: " The voice laughed. Silly psychologist. Don’t want to ...

Wow. Well, let me just say, you're pretty long winded, aye? That was a lot to comprehend, so my first suggestion is, maybe, break it up a bit? The story ...

i havent been able to see my previous posted stuff. idk if it's just me or others. it happens all the time to all sorts of things.

The Voyage of the Pied Piper Ch. 3 A storm was coming. I could smell it in the air. Looking down at the map I grab my compass and measured ...

As i have perviously said many times before, poetry is the hardest to critique because it all has to do with the writers own feelin g and 'poetic liscense' if ...

My teater are vapires? I found it pretty hard to be afraid. At first I thought you were making a mistake on purpose but the more I read, the more ...

Hey, I wrote this on a whim. I probably wont turn it into anything but if enough people really like it, I guess I could? Hope you like it! And ...

i have said before that poetry is often hard to critique but yours is really good! i quite like it. im filled up with this emotion so well put into ...

So, the name cought me and i was interested. the text bored me at first, but towards the middle it started to get interesting. only a few of gramatical mistakes.one: ...

I've said this before, but i really think poetry is hard to critique because of all the different 'poetic lisence' so to speak. i really liked this despite how it ...