Djinn

I actually based my username off of a race in a children's book. The name of the book was "Children of the Lamp" and I have always identified with the ...

Oh my gosh, I can't believe the Bartimaeus Trilogy is on that. I loved that series even though it was so dark. I didn't know anyone else knew about it! ...

Ever since the point system went away, no one comments or review any more. I'm finding that the site doesn't help if you're just posting something that no one reads ...

Yep. Let's say 'dead' because this is my if this was gone....I'd have no life. IE = dead.

okay, i have a question. why is it called Prodigal Child? just wondering, because i didnt make the connection. btw, i did laugh at the end. (though at first i ...

Prodigal Child The cold endless expanse of white was before me and like every doctor I had begun to get bored. The tireless working days and nights where one after ...

XD Well, that was quite interesting. It seemed to have a ryhthm of its own even though you didn't want it to ryhm. By the way, why would you not ...

Cycling I laugh at your jokes, I jest with your words, I smile at your looks, I continue living each and every day. I hurt inside. Laugh. I don’t want ...

Hey! I love your poem! I did have a hard time coming up with the rythm. I felt it should have more of a beat especially when it is a ...

Don’t Get too Close To My Bed Everything seems unreal. I lay in bed while sweat soaked the cloth around my pillow and my tangled blond hair could no longer ...

Hey, Thanks sooo much for the comments!!! Since I wrote this is in a past voice I wanted it to be more about the things she saw rather than did. ...

Brides to Darkness Today was like any other day at the farm. My mother was working in our tiny and sufficient vegetable garden and my father plowing in the family ...

I feel like this poem is about a breakup...you purpously compared an onion to love and sin. Are you ok??? I kinda liked it despite the sad, powerless, forlorn, empty, ...

I always find that it's really hard to critique poetry because poetry is all about emotion no matter what's wrong with it. However, I really liked your poem, and dont ...

The Voyage of the Pied Piper Ch. 5 “Fifty-five…fifty-six…fifty-seven,” I muttered. This was something I really enjoyed; counting my gold. “…and sixty-two. There, finished.” I looked back