DixielandMisfit

It captures the power of an addiction well, the conflicting emotions and the total battle of what should be and what is. It showed how we fight the lure of ...

I think there were some grammatical errors, but as they have already been mentioned I shall tell you what else I thought. Amazing imagery and words, the different stanzas were ...

There were a few awkward moments I had to re-read, but I think over all that it was well written(: I tihnk my favorite line had to be "Pride held ...

I loved it. It flowed extremely well, and the way it was written was amazing. I liked the word choice, the breaks and the overall layout of it.

Children cry in the dead of night screaming for solace As their mothers try to tell them it’s alright as they are told to hush, be quiet The silence is ...

Go to sleep and close your teary eyes Never again wake to see the night Hush little girl don't you dare cry Sit back and enjoy your final night Here ...

You're making it so hard for me to be surprised. I can be the real me, no judgement in your eyes. Something about you makes everything seem okay I never ...

[i]Hey y'all, I'm Chels and I'm new. Thank you Captain Obvious[!] I'm 17 and a senior at the local high school. I graduate in December and am hoping to go ...