Diversetactics

I have a feeling that John Edwards is going to be up in the top of the running candidates. He ran as a running mate for Kerry last time, so ...

He was nearing the pick up point. He could now see a helicopter heading his way from a distance, one of his. It was time to get out of there. ...

Thanks for the feedback. I think every little bit helps. :)

Alarms still blaring in the distance, he shifted his pack into a comfortable position and started sneaking his way over the rest of the hill. He had to get out ...

Thanks for the crit's guys. I am trying to think of a name as I go along and "the flaw" is going to become apparent in the next part I ...

Quickly disasembling his rifle, he slowly backed up from the ledge to his camp site. It was entirely hidden on the side of the hill on the outskirts of town. ...

The key was deep breathing. Wait for that moment between heartbeats, where everything is perfectly still, all while riding the edge, the technique describing keeping the trigger on his .50 ...

I liked it. It seems well written and also like thought went into the process. It didn't feel spontanious, and though in a fairly general topic, love, it was probably ...

I am pretty sure I have heard this before, but it has not gotten old yet.