Diva

WOW! its the best piece of writing in my opinion. Hats off to you for using this amazing platform that thewebsite has given to you! Via you need to forget ...

I agree with the above views at places.I thought it was not very well thought out but still hats off too you for explaining your thoughts in happens to every ...

[pre]Anger boils within me, Feelings surge... Ebb of my emotions, Peak of my pain! But words fail me, My pen bleeds... I ponder for words With my pen blotting the ...

I liked the concept of a girl and boy's first kiss the kind of feelings that you have put down in your story seem real and i'm sure everybody's first ...

The different colours in the rainbow actually made me smile and as one of the writers above said your use of symbolism was good although you can improve it by ...

[pre]When the night's deep And the air sings a different symphony I walk along the riverside With some soulful melodies playing in me On nights like these when i have ...

[pre]Some are fond of sunshine; am i But i like the rain, too, Falling from the sky For when merry April Trips o'er hill and plain Isn't it delightful. Running ...

A well thought out poem i suppose well it was exceptionally definetely made me wonder for a while i mean the poem created a scene in my head and it ...

I think overall it was a good story when i read it surely made me think that the writer has put forward a realistic scenario that usually takes place nowdays.Although ...